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Are Sharpe and I Lo Begnar yet?

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Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:25 am

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Rawr. I'm Davoe. I'm 14, I live in Sydney, Australia.
-Started animating on the 25th of June.
-Got intermediates on the 4th of December.

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Dale
Post subject: Re: First Animation... on DarkDemon
Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:50 am

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I would say medium beginner, you need to ease in some parts.
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Post subject: Re: First Animation... on DarkDemon
Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:55 am

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You are really good. You have good physics, movement and timing. i think u should go inter. I'm not sure about going up but i think u ask a Admin. Just check tuts.
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Post subject: Re: First Animation... on DarkDemon
Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 12:03 pm

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Don't listen to n8wazear (nothing offencive) but your not close to be moved up, I think you need to work on all parts, thats easing, physics and stiffness.

Easing is how fast an object / action moves. try to do a punch, I guess you notice how it goes slow in the beginning, and in the middle of the punch it's fastest, it slows down in the end. do like that with all movements.

Physics is basicly everything that has to do with movements and object, it's to make the animation look as it would in reality, there's alot of easing in this part.

Stiffness can you get rid of by moveing every joint on the stick so that no part of it is still, ever. Don't move them to much or it will look jerky, it yo preform a kick it's the leg that moves most (lol)

Keep at it. whats with that lightsaber btw?:^)
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Post subject: Re: First Animation... on DarkDemon
Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 12:15 pm

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Flyaway wrote:Don't listen to n8wazear (nothing offencive) but your not close to be moved up, I think you need to work on all parts, thats easing, physics and stiffness.

Easing is how fast an object / action moves. try to do a punch, I guess you notice how it goes slow in the beginning, and in the middle of the punch it's fastest, it slows down in the end. do like that with all movements.

Physics is basicly everything that has to do with movements and object, it's to make the animation look as it would in reality, there's alot of easing in this part.

Stiffness can you get rid of by moveing every joint on the stick so that no part of it is still, ever. Don't move them to much or it will look jerky, it yo preform a kick it's the leg that moves most (lol)

Keep at it. whats with that lightsaber btw?:^)
umm i dunno its just some little beam thing to throw at a wall. cheesygrin)
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Post subject: Re: First Animation... on DarkDemon
Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:41 pm

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The backs were stiff, and when the people hit the wall, they fell kind of slow and stiffly. You need to ease them when they are falling. Try making tests for specific movements and effects. Keep animating!
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Post subject: Re: First Animation... on DarkDemon
Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:50 pm

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What i think you need to work on is movements rather the effects which i see you doing... Check out some tutorials and look at how a stick figure shoould move to have a better appeal to the watcher of your animation anyyways me beginner you need some easeing and realism. Keeep it up dude! -Spitfire Courtesy?

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Post subject: Re: First Animations... on DarkDemon
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 1:18 am

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Thanks for all the positive comments and constructive criticism. Cheers! I'll work on those things.
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Post subject: Re: Dave's Thread. Updated!
Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:47 am

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Thats right i just bumped, got some new animations :) hey are you allowed to put ezytoons on your own thread?
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Post subject: Re: Dave's Thread. Updated!
Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 2:09 am

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okay, i think for a new dude you are good, you just need 2 try to make your pivots faster and work on physics, mainly in the kicks, but other than that good job, med beginner


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Post subject: Re: Dave's Thread. Updated!
Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:53 am

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Hey, its neru! Umm well i think you should have more easing in your animations. Your animations are smooth, but more easing would do the trick. And easing also adds gravity so your animations wont look like crap. Overall your animations are pretty smooth. Med beginner, getting to med-high beginner. 9.8 / 10 :D.
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Post subject: Re: Dave's Thread. Updated!
Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 2:18 pm

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davo#405 wrote:hey are you allowed to put ezytoons on your own thread?


No, theres a topic for posting easytoonz

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Anyway, my favourite animation was the "ummnoob" It was long and involved a lot of action. The movements need fixing though(stiffness was a problem, needed some easing in the attacks). The BGs were good and the beam at the end looked great. You should make a dbz animation :}
Keep it up, med beginner.
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Post subject: Re: Dave's Thread. Updated!
Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 3:17 am

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Cheers neru, i shall definately work on easing, they are from about a month ago. and yes they are quite gay, everytime i try to do an animation i just can't be stuffed to make em walk....

Sharpshooter just so you know, i love dragon ball z :D haha it was supposed to be a kamehameha! but i didn't change the colours through and it got gif. raped, it was longer but pivot came up with an error code and my computer couldn't handle it so i held esc untill it all went away and i lost it al... anyway thanks for the cc :D
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 9:00 am

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hey sorry for a double post but, uber bump! new animation :D
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Post subject: Re: Dave's Thread. Updated!
Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:42 pm

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you're really good, i like ur new one, ur the best one i'v seen so far

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