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Post subject: Strider - A session of beetles
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:38 pm

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Well, hello there!

Here in my thread, i would like some good and helpfull comments, not all those like "Lol, inter definately, CURTSZ??!!??".
I love CC, so blow away on what's NOT good in my animations. That's the only way i can get better.
Also, no spamming, thank you.

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  • Beginner - Aug 9, 2008
  • Intermediate - May 22, 2009
  • Beginner - Nov 8, 2009



Upcoming Animations

General Burton
A NY 2148 sidestory about the general who first appears in the last part of the original NY 2148
Progress: 390 frames
Estimated: 450+ frames

Negative Tribute
A tribute to Elmo's Negative. Though without all the sick backgrounds :/
Progress: 184
Estimated: 200-250 frames


Screenshots

General Burton 1
General Burton 2

Negative Tribute 1


Beginner Animations

Session
Image
Credits - None
Frames - 56
Note - As sharp as a knife.

Jumpy
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 98
Note - I love the first half, hate the second half :/

Baby Crocodile
Gif
Credits - Snr. Weird (unraping)
Frames - 54
Note - First thing in quite a while. It's pretty nice.

Oriental Part 1
Small Screen
Big Screen
Credits - t h U n d e r (idea), Snr. Weird (unraping)
Frames - 177
Note - I like it pretty much, especially the first run.

Intermediate Animations

DDC9
Small Screen
Big Screen
Piv
Credits - Frozenfire (splat), BN (transparency ball), Bolt (alphabet] Legos (sunshine)
Frames - 462
Note - Umm... I'm glad it made it :D

Oh well
Piv
Credits - Frozenfire (splat)
Frames - 132
Note - Cwoke didn't like it at all :C But I do. Also, that blood is nice.

Punch
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 26
Note - Studied a real life punch, and made this as a test.

Spontaneous Combustion *REMIX*
Gif
Credits - UG (idea), Frozenfire (blood splat)
Frames - 29
Note - Well.

Shotgun
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 20
Note - Made a gun. Gave it to a guy. BOOM!

Swordplay II
Gif
Credits - Sousuke (idea), BN[?] (Transparent Blast)
Frames - 45
Note - Oh yea. New sword.

Combo
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 39
Note - Just some punches and kicks. Yea.

Cloning
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 38
Note - Testing out my new stick.

Gymnastics
Gif
Credits - Atok Niiro (idea)
Frames - 44
Note - Some really cool movements.

Fighting
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 42
Note - Never was really good with fighting, but I really like this one.

Swordplay
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 38
Note - Pretty cool and realistic movements

Magical
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Credits - None
Frames - 96
Note - Sexy moves at the beginning

Boring
Gif
Credits - NMH (alphabet)
Frames - 66
Note - Great table reactions.

Walk-Run-Roll
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 30
Note - I actually like this one :3

Got Him
Gif
Credits - NMH (alphabet)
Frames - 59
Note - Well.

Squid
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 30
Note - AAAAAAA TENTACLES

The Pit
Gif
Credits - None
Frames - 88
Note - Hmm.

Classroom
Gif
Piv
Credits - Pyromecha+Dean+Mantis (idea), Pyromecha (base, M16), Nukem (modded AK-47), Outrage (hand)
Other credits - Eliphant <3 (unraping the gif), Kultivate <3 (helping with the animation, maybe flashing), Razo <3 (giving great cc while making), Pivad <3 (giving great cc whle making)
Frames - 351
Note - Got me intermediate. Oh yea


Beginner Animations

Epic
Gif
Credits - Whirly (base)
Frames - 117
Note - Fuck this one, see the above.

New running style
Gif
Credits - Crunchi (base), Whirly (base)
Frames - 26
Note - Really cool new running style i got (NOT)

Where is he!? (NMH tribute)
Gif
Unraped, but slow Gif
Piv
Credits - NMH (rabbit, grass, idea), Crunchin (base), Bolt (alphabet)
Frames - 92
Note - I love the way the rabbit just don't get what's going on >.> MAJOR GIF RAPE

Yes
Gif
Credits - Siouxstar (plane), Droidz.org (fire)
Frames - 104
Note - I love that gun :P

Fatality
Gif
Credits - Maykon (sparks), Elmo (blood), Droidz.org (fire)
Frames - 206
Note - Trying out a new style, which i really like.



OLDER ANIMATIONS CAN BE FOUND AT
http://www.youtube.com/user/Xaine45
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:43 pm

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I'm a faghole now? ):

Anyways, nice easing, lil' bit stiff there in the back, otherwise good. One or two awkward movements at the house part, and the trails were a bit too much (That's NMH, not you. ;D) but overall borderline. Get rid of the stiffness and that's about all you really need.

Courtesy?<3 if you do. :D
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:00 pm

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I think it is inters worthy. Hope you get in. :)
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:01 pm

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Well, me too guys :D
Thanks for support.
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:20 pm

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smoke wrote:I think it is inters worthy. Hope you get in. :)



I like the animation alot very eased but sorta stiff. You know what i dont understand My animation was just as good as this but it is still Mid Beginner?
IM talkin about my last three And the one i did for inter try. Thats some Bs

But I like your animations really cool and Original.
I love Courtesy Becuase it makes the world go round :)
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:29 pm

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KillerInstinct wrote:You know what i dont understand My animation was just as good as this but it is still Mid Beginner?
You are medium beginner. You're animations are not as good as his at all.


Really good. It's inter worthy in my opinion. I hated the explosions though. They were just too simple. and should have sorta faded out. I also didn't like the ending when the open-head guy fell.
As I said before inter worthy. GOOD LUCK.
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:42 pm

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loved it, i say borders maybe inters. Courtesy?
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:45 pm

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Nice animation.
Your interz attempt was interz worthy for me.
But the ending of it was a little stiff and a little choppy too.
Nice work.
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:47 pm

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Very nice. Smooth and well eased, although it is a little stiff.
Borderline. You're really close to inter!
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:27 am

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Thanks for comments, I NEED MORE CC!
Returning courtesy for those who deserve it.

OOOH
Going to Hamborg for two days, won't be active there, sorry :/
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Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 5:08 pm

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Hey There ^_^

Nice anim,
Great style,
and funny :P

What you could try to do,
is get your landings a bit more realistic,
like..
when the stick falls and hits the floor,
he could bounce up a bit more.
And when landing on his feet,
he could go through the knees a tiny bit more. ;)

Courtesy? (when i update again, sorry :3)
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Strider
Post subject: Re: Tinyman Returns (Intermediate Attempt) - Ohai there
Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 8:29 am

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Ohai update olololol.

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Post subject: Re: Arm Fold - Ohai there
Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 8:42 am

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nice only was he meant to look realistic when he twisted his arms around and it stopped in the midle of the full twist,?

If so, It looks more realistic when you don't bring the actual arms to a fullstop.
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Post subject: Re: Arm Fold - Ohai there
Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 1:48 pm

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@Conspiracy - No, it was meant to be two different movements. I see your point though.

New layout, and new editing color or wtf it's called >_>
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Post subject: Re: Arm Fold - Ohai there - Regular on Droidz!
Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 4:06 pm

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this thread surprised me, for a beginer you are doing very well.
I would say one more hard worked animation would prove to others that you are indeed an intermediate!.

Keep it up,

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