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what am i so far.

low begginer
0
No votes
med begginer
21
64%
high begginer
9
27%
low inter 0.o
3
9%
 
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GorePal
Post subject: __-GorePal's THread-__ *UPDATED* short fight and SHORTS
Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 5:23 pm

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__-GorePals THREAD!-__

COURTESY RULE
i do give courtesy only to helpful smart comments, not smart ass >_> helpful and give me some CC, dont dare say 'this was smooth bordline'
>_>

__-NEWEST-__
short fight - The stk i used utterly sucked, sorry about that :3
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SHORTS
Karma <_<
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I steal People ^_^ - shortie
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6387/stealwq3.gif

__-NEW-__
Grays fighting style - unfinished
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/9251/graytribxt4.gif
Backwards Punch
http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/8225/bwardsdu6.gif
very short fight
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3002 ... lueds7.gif
double kick - easing is terrible
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6097 ... ickyc9.gif
combo trail#1
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/1295 ... estqj2.gif
combo trial#2
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8593 ... st2jx2.gif


__-OLD ANIMATIONS-__
LOL
http://img485.imageshack.us/img485/2158/lolfr3.gif
practicing camera and randomness
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/4954 ... keyqi9.gif
easing test
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/9482 ... estdi9.gif
punch test
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/405/ ... estsc7.gif
small combo test
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3227 ... estjd1.gif
Walking test
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/625/ ... vedud2.gif
jump loop
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5928 ... vedmp8.gif
running test
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/1088 ... vedtu0.gif
gun test
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9836 ... vedyk0.gif
Shot Test
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7725/s ... vedkg3.gif
Credits
Smore cheesygrin)
Last edited by GorePal on Fri Oct 19, 2007 10:05 am, edited 41 times in total.
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 5:45 pm

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theres just something about teh gun one that i like even though it has not reactions it just owns for mei dont know why but teh gun looks intermediate even though i know its not
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:40 pm

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your very good if you just started, i like the gun one, but the stick cold have more of a reaction to it, i cant really tell what rank you are cause theyre kinda short, but i think maybe med beginner -ish
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 8:10 pm

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I though that the running loop was done very well.
The gun loop i did not like. The gun was nicely detailed , but the stick shows no reaction.
The gunshot was nice too.
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GorePal
Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 8:59 pm

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biggrin) thanks and the stk didnt have reaction cause i dont know how to give reaction im still very new to this :)) but thanks for the comments
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Smore
Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 9:19 pm

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The Running Loop - This was extremely poorly animated, didn't look as though much effort was put into it. It was really choppy. - Low Beginner rank.

The Jump Loop - Again, poorly animated. When he was coming down, he magically appeared in another spot, bad mistake, try again. - Low Beginner rank.

Gun Test - Choppy arm movement, and there was no reaction to the gunfire. I'd normally say Low Beginner, but I see you tried on that one, but in the future include to ractions okay? - Med Beginner rank.

I realise that's 2 Low Beginner ranks to the one Med Beginner rank, but I still voted Med Beginner.

Try some more tests and edit your previous ones, try to make them smoother.

Certainly add some reactions to the gun test as well.
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GorePal
Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 9:54 pm

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ok thanks for that i wont remake them but i will make more tests cheesygrin)
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:25 pm

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prity good its smoth and good esing
GorePal
Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:32 pm

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cheesygrin) hey thanks man
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Smore
Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 11:19 pm

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K, good job on saving them correctly, they look a lot better now.

The Walk Test - It was a very good test, unfortunately, it's hard to rate tests, but that went really well. It went a bit faster towards the end, which ruined it a little bit though.

The Shot Test - This looked quite good. The reactions were pretty good.

I want to see you spend some time on your next few animations, using all your tests to make a decent animation.
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GorePal
Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 11:22 pm

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thanks smore for the gif saving tut and now i think i will make a decent long animation. cheesygrin)
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Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 11:30 pm

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Okay. For a newcomer, you are exceptional. It'd be amazing if you do make it into the epic collab by the end of this month though, but you can always try. Let me give you a list of things to improve on.
  • 1. Shrinking your frames. All your animations are huge. Every animator saves their animation with a 2 or a 3 in the shrink frames section, when saving as a .gif. It removes the pixely look and the animation generally looks better.
  • 2. Foot placements. When a character moves, his feet remain in the same place, unless he slides his foot or he lifts it up. So, when you jump for example, you want his feet to not move around on the ground, until he jumps up.

    Also, you might notice his feet are moving nearer, then farther from the line. You want his feet at the same level throughout. Click here for my tutorial on fixing this.
  • 3. Holding a gun properly. If you check, you never even pull the trigger. You want his back arm to be on that part of the gun, and not the magazine... until he reloads. You can find some info on animating guns from here.
  • 4. Gun reaction. It seems too fast, and generally a bullet wouldn't send you flying back. Click here for more about gunshot reactions.
  • 5. Stiffness. Move every joint in every frame. When you walk, move the back and bob the head. When you punch, move the legs, etc. Here is a stiffness tutorial.
Edit - Ignore my first remark, seeing as you've fixed it.
Smore
Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 11:28 am

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Punch Test - Awesome. Although just a test, it was a very good one. And because it was a boneless arm, good judgement on not adding a tremor.

Combo Test - Nice style. But just before the first punch, it looks very stiff. Sort the pre-punch out and maybe the stiff kick afterwards out. The punch was good though.
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GorePal
Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 11:29 am

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cheesygrin) thanks for the tip and comment
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Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 11:41 am

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Well they were very good for some of your firsts, but you should work on stiffness and on your physics, otherwise, great job on those! I hope you also checked out Bahas Ultimate tut, It helps everyone including me.

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